Friday, January 14, 2011

For BFA critique

It's just the illustration that's ready for critique. The text treatment will come later, hopefully with some guidance from a graphic designer. Thanks!


  1. I think it looks great. My immediate suggestion would be if your going to keep that neat paper texture behind the image to drop both the type and image opacity to make it feel like it's on the page. Not a ton just a little, so the grit of the paper comes through. Aside from that I think it looks really good. Great job!

  2. I agree with cliff. This crit is pretty nit picky the only other thing I continue to play wtih, is the darks in the water I feel like the atmosphere affects everything, but the water. I am attributing this to the lights and darks,but it could be color. Also the atmosphere a little stronger on one of the trees in the background to help push depth. I see your doing it on the farthest tree, and I kind of want to see it on the next tree closer. On the whole, great job!