Sam all I can say is zombie brain matter is rad! I think it would look better if you could tighten up the action marks in the back. Make them harder graphic shapes. The brushed action marks and type look more like an after thought than a finished idea.
That's what I was going to say! Except about the zombie brains... :) There should be a reason for the texture behind your dog-man especially. Try making fade from red to white with more streaks- a tighter texture?
Comic I am working on- let me know what you all think! Real quick, they are astro zombies and he is Maximus the space dog.
Sam all I can say is zombie brain matter is rad! I think it would look better if you could tighten up the action marks in the back. Make them harder graphic shapes. The brushed action marks and type look more like an after thought than a finished idea.
ReplyDeleteThat's what I was going to say! Except about the zombie brains... :) There should be a reason for the texture behind your dog-man especially. Try making fade from red to white with more streaks- a tighter texture?
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