.... and other wayward teachings of Wade Huntsman.
I like it I will chat with ya about it in Digillo.
I think it needs something to tie it all together- it is a little spotty compositionally. It seems like they're waiting in line for something... if it is just supposed to be a jumble of characters I think you need to have them overlap more. Also, as your adding color- try focusing on what the thing you're coloring is made out of and focus on making the color look like that texture...Helpful? Sorry- that was a lot of crit... you can take it, right, Sam?