Thursday, June 24, 2010


I got a job for a Credit Union in Utah through Jared! YAY! They're aiming for the parents taking their kids to college and opening an account for them. Any suggestions?


  1. I like it. I like the color usage, however the color intensity on the middle box is more intense than the bottom box. one feels hoe depot one feels bland. I wouldn't make either the same as the other, but I would like to see a little more intensity in the bottom box to help transition to the car, keeping a happy feeling throughout. Also, I kind of feel like the girl in the back seat is a bit conflicted in her eyes, her face reads excited, but her eyes read as tired. the parents are similar but it makes sense, since they probably went through the same thing when they were a kid and they are simply reminiscing not getting giddy.Just some suggestions. Also, I feel like the front wheel needs to be further forward, or the ellipses need changing. I say that because of how far forward the other wheel feels. I think its the ellipses being too open and the hubcaps being centered. that is getting pretty nit picky tho. Looks great and congratulations on the job!

  2. I actually like the eyes as they are now. I feel she has a goo ga ga look on her face over the boys. You know that's what it's all about when you first start school. Don't worry to much about the stylization in general. I think all the shapes you have look great, don't change a thing. The one saturated box needs brought down in temperature though. Other than that it looks spectacular! I am really loving the direction your taking Emily!

  3. I know that this is an older design, but this made a great ad!!! I am now the VP of Marketing at USU Credit Union and really liked the designs that you created. I still use them in some places...

    I have been exploring your site and must say you do great work.