I really can't put a finger on it either. I would suggest stacking the blueberries up a little higher in a pyramid shape maybe? Try it if it doesn't work than throw it out.
Another thing you might try, everything seems to be pointing to the left, it makes the image feel like its going to tip over. Along with what cliff said, what about either lessening the tilt of the frame box, or reversing it so you have a harmonious opposite? Not sure, anyway hope this helps. I agree with you both, there is something about it that doesn't sit exactly right. As cliff said, if these ideas don't work toss em :P
I'm not sure what you're going for with the design, but everything seems to be contained and vignetted. Which isn't bad but maybe pick which you want to focus on the berries or the lines and supporting elements for them. Try adding some bigger lighter stars in the background that break format. I like your color choices and the craft is bang on. Hope that helps
I'm struggling with this one- the design just doesn't seem right. Any ideas?
I really can't put a finger on it either. I would suggest stacking the blueberries up a little higher in a pyramid shape maybe? Try it if it doesn't work than throw it out.
ReplyDeleteThanks Cliff. :)
ReplyDeleteAnother thing you might try, everything seems to be pointing to the left, it makes the image feel like its going to tip over. Along with what cliff said, what about either lessening the tilt of the frame box, or reversing it so you have a harmonious opposite? Not sure, anyway hope this helps. I agree with you both, there is something about it that doesn't sit exactly right. As cliff said, if these ideas don't work toss em :P
ReplyDeleteYou guys are the best. Thanks for the help!
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure what you're going for with the design, but everything seems to be contained and vignetted. Which isn't bad but maybe pick which you want to focus on the berries or the lines and supporting elements for them. Try adding some bigger lighter stars in the background that break format. I like your color choices and the craft is bang on. Hope that helps
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