Saturday, July 10, 2010

Playground Propaganda

Do you get the editorial narrative here? Problems with colors/values let me know.


  1. Alas playground propaganda .. I think the values look good, and the trees are a good graphic read. Sam and I were talking, and we came to the conclusion the thing that messes with our head is the basket ball hoop on the far right. Im not sure it needs it, I am wondering if you get rid of it, or even adjust its size how it would look. Just some ideas take em or leave em :)

  2. Cliff... it's great!
    There is something... I think it's too big- but I don't know... The texture is great, but I think we've got this really big inactive space to the right. The subtlety is fantastic- the red motif and slower read is great. Perhaps if we were 20 feet closer?