Starchild Lineup

FINAL REVISION for now... at least until I get some sleep. @..@

Revision: Dog has been added. AND I SPILT ACETONE ON MY WACOM!!!! ARGGHHH!! Everything seems to be working fine, but the touch sensitive scroll area is acting wacky. I hope it dries out without problems @.@ Looking at it now I think I will shrink the dog even more. 

This is to figure out the layout of the characters. I think I will print two in case Brother Abbegglen is not appeased with overlapping characters with them more spread out. There is a dog that is not pictured, but that is because I am painting until my eyes bleed tonight. If any of you happen to be on, anyone.. Crits are welcome especially before I print them and use a ton of ink on my printer ;)

round two

So I tried to fix some of the stuff that was suggested such as the light and the floor. Let me know if there is anything else I can do to improve- thanks again

Another Idea, A New stylization

Another Update. Sorry for the low res. I am still experimenting with graphic vs representational style. You can see the differences in the other pics I left up.  Also, i am still working on the apron, gloves and boots for mr. lance on the left. 

EDIT: Hows this? I had some crits after thinking that the gesture was simply too awkward. I added a gun holster to her leg, and a sidearm holster similar to detectives. I added a satchel for good measure. :) 

I am needing feedback for her pose. ignore her right hand, I was just having fun. :) Anyway I am playing with a new way of doing things, (aka my digital process) She is wearing a kind of jumpsuit they use in the air force. I am needing to check my sources but I am going to ensure that they used a similar style of uniform around 1940s. either way this is a second concept of Evelynn that I feel like I am connecting with more. I want to add belts, and such but I will show you once I get them in. What do you guys think of her? Right now I only have local colors, but once I nail the pose I want to proceed adding the shading. I have included one of the color comps of Adom, and the wip of her father lance. He is a gunsmith, and she has been his apprentice/daughter for all her life. I put Adom in there for scale mostly, but in the end I will better hook them up as a whole.There are two more characters to come, so stay tuned.  The sooner I have crits the better. Thanks everyone!

Evelynn WIP

I increased the size of the head and shrunk the hands, did that fix the problems Emily? Anyone else have any proportion pushing/pulling ideas I can do before inking digitally?

with no work comes no deadlines for working on personal stuff. this is the newest- let me know what you all think and how I can do better- thanks all. btw, this lil guy is an engineer dwarf- still attracted to treasure, diggin and the such. as we all know, there is never a treasure that is not guarded by some nasty thing. this is our lil guy dispatchin said evil and trying to make off with whatever valuable things are in that there chest.

Evelynn Concept WIP

Here is the quick sketch I have for the character "Evelynn" in the Starchild story, she is one of the inhabitants of the world Adom enters. I am going for a modified Victorian aesthetic/1940's steam punk. Note, that it is not on Earth, this is a civilization on a separate planet. I need me some feedback. ;)