Wednesday, May 19, 2010


here is the somewhat new one- please crit!!

4 comments:

  1. this one is much better than the first. He looks almost like he is scared instead of ferocious, though. And tp definitely isn't a first read- maybe try to make it a little more distinctive in his hand?

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  2. Bring a couple of tear lines into the tp. It will read much better. Same goes with the tp on the tree too. As for placement I think your are dead on. I always say when in doubt bring it to the chest. As for the t-shirt templates I use go to http://arsenal.gomedia.us/templates.html. They are a little pricey but well worth it. I can't tell you how many people I show them to think I already printed them.

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  3. awesome guys! I will try that stuff out right away.

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  4. looks good dude! I dont know if you need the tp flying out behind his body or like others have said make it look more like tp but i think you dont need it. Tp in the trees looks kind of like snow maybe have it more rapping around the overall form of the and more random not so organized

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