well, SAM... (not Preston...) :) I think it's better! I think that some more shadows in the solder himself would make it a little stronger- you have some light on his right side, but not really much dark on the other. I like the darks up where his eye sockets should be, but I think they need to be a little bigger and kind-of bleed off the left side of his face. Also, I think the black outlines of the target-practice men should be a grey instead of black. What da ya' think?
This is the finished piece- let me know what I can do to make it better please- thanks!
well, SAM... (not Preston...) :) I think it's better! I think that some more shadows in the solder himself would make it a little stronger- you have some light on his right side, but not really much dark on the other. I like the darks up where his eye sockets should be, but I think they need to be a little bigger and kind-of bleed off the left side of his face. Also, I think the black outlines of the target-practice men should be a grey instead of black.
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I will play with it a bit and see what I can do. Thanks!
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